At the sound of his name, he made a noncommittal mumble. It might have been: "Siriushshaddupmsleeping…" At her laughter, his eyes flew open and he sat up, staring around.
(Incongruous with his mild appearance and reputation, his wand was locked in his hand; sharp as a dueler, steady almost as an auror. First hint that he did indeed hang around with James Potter and a child of the House of Black.)
"Uh… this… I'm… we're…" He blinked at her. (Wand not pointed at her, good for him.) "Hi?"
NOPE, it's perfect! PS Is that a "Bedknobs and Broomsticks" reference?? :-o \o/
(Incongruous with his mild appearance and reputation, his wand was locked in his hand; sharp as a dueler, steady almost as an auror. First hint that he did indeed hang around with James Potter and a child of the House of Black.)
"Uh… this… I'm… we're…" He blinked at her. (Wand not pointed at her, good for him.) "Hi?"